J.C. Martin, Fighter Writer

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Six Sentence Sunday: Narcissus

This is a weekly feature whereby participants post six (6) sentences of their work, published or otherwise, to be read (and possibly critiqued) by everyone else. Thank you to all regular commenters for your return visit, and welcome to all new visitors! :)

I thought I’d introduce you to Lancer’s partner in crime-solving this week. Here, she appears for the first time in Oracle, catching Lancer in the act of narcissism:

Official cover reveal on January 23rd, 2012! Stay tuned!

A sharp rap on the driver’s side window snapped me from my vanity check. My partner, Detective Sergeant Sam Blaize, grinned at me through the glass barrier.

“You can stare in a magic mirror all you like,” Blaize said, as I opened the car door, “but it won’t make you any prettier.” The corners of her eyes crinkled in amusement.

“Actually, I was seeing how long it’d take for my face to crack the mirror,” I stood up, towering over Blaize. Most women of her stature would cross the street when they saw me coming, but I’d seen Blaize take down enough men my size—one of them a knife-wielding maniac—to know my imposing physique didn’t faze her one bit.

That’s it for this week! Now I’m off to read some awesome six sentences! Care to join me?


Comments

17 Responses to “Six Sentence Sunday: Narcissus”

  1. Trisha says:

    Very nice excerpt…I want to read more! :)

  2. Oh, I love the introduction to these two characters. Looking forward to reading more! :)

  3. Oh, I enjoy them already! Want MORE. Terrific snippet!

  4. Lila Shaw says:

    Ha! I love it when men are caught doing the same sorts of things they like to bust women’s chops over.

  5. Great snippet. Loved the interaction between them. Great six.

  6. Nice! Loved the byplay between these two

  7. sue says:

    sounds like a mutuallly respective relationship. I may have to get an e reader unless you publish in paper… wonderful characters

  8. Krystal Wade says:

    I love Blaize’s attitude. Very cool. Got a really good feeling about both of the characters in this scene!

  9. Siobhan Muir says:

    Fun six, JC! I liked his acknowledgement of her abilities despite her size. :)

  10. Vivien Dean says:

    Good character building. Thanks for sharing!

  11. Guilie says:

    She sounds brilliant! Great descriptions, JC–thanks for sharing!

  12. Barb says:

    Nice “meeting”! :-)

  13. Kelly Said says:

    Great banter between Lancer and Sam Blaize (great names, btw! :) ) and you gave us so much information in only six sentences – very nicely done! I’m definitely looking forward to the release date for this one ;)

  14. Susanna says:

    Excellent! I always love your 6 sentences… except they make me want to keep reading…!

  15. Did I hear a note of admiration in his voice? Great introduction to these two!

  16. Great dialogue and great intro. It’s going to be fun listening in on these two.

  17. Interesting dynamic and banter. Wonder what’s boiling beneath the surface…

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